A story in momorial of Luc

[madc0w]

I had to write a hero story for english, so i wrote one about Lucretius! if you see any grammactical or spelling mistakes, can you please correct them for me. (sorry its so long and sorry for changing some of the names, such as Terev and Dikap. also sorry to Hd-c for calling him corky, i needed a name, and that was the first one that came to my mind.)
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The Story of the Hero Lucretius
Lucretius was a very simple man. He was one of the king’s officials, but he never abused his power. He never fought and was very peaceful. People came from all over Soldering Island to seek his incredible knowledge. He was well respected by everyone, and he respected everyone. The people of Soldering Island lived in peace and harmony. That was until the flood of invaders.
One late night, the King of Soldering Island, King Hecken, made an amazing decree throughout the land. Everyone on Soldering Island was in awe of what the king did, and word spread out among the land as to his recent and prior accomplishments. The word spread to a Noobisor, the King of Slashland. He sent out a message to his generals, such as Commander Taco, to invade the Land of Soldering Island. And the invasion had begun.
The people of Soldering Island held off Noobisors forces very well, but Noobisor had many riches, and King Hecken knew something must be done. He declared that any man who killed Noobisor would become a Moderator, the second highest rank in the government of Soldering Island. With the great warrior Abbibi resting after the terrors of war, Lucretius knew that he must step up and use his knowledge to defeat the Invaders and their leader. Before being sent off, King Hecken gave him five spirits to follow him and support him in his journey. The first spirit was Ryden, the man with electric fists. The second spirit was Slived, the prince of the underworld. The next spirit was Triton, the restorer of broken and ancient objects. The fourth spirit was Buell, who was a penguin who could answer any question. The last spirit was Gannon, who could banish men to the underworld. The five spirits together were called “The Guardians of the Island.â€

[Darth Fett]

Cool.Someone oughta show Luc this.

[gamer2]

Great Story man i didnt see anthing wrong

[madc0w]

thanks, it all kinda came to me, and i actually ENJOYED writing it!

[minkster]

Haha Noobisor That was a very good story...I enjoyed it and I bet Luc would too

[Metroid fan]

... Awesome give it to the lucretius king of... hobbes!

[HotDog-Cart]

I thougt there would have been sex in there :p

And Dont call me corky

Call me Josh
and Im Not Obnoxios, Im not loud

[madc0w]

lol, but you use to be. Josh, thats your name, but sorry, im not going to reprint 6 pages . Also, i dont think my english teacher would appreciate a Luc and Ada sex scene.

[gannon]

lol, Luc is gonna crap himself when he reads it

[sam]

You missed the part with me in it lol seemed decent to me, what grade are you in?

[HotDog-Cart]

Hope fully your teacher doesnt put it up around the skool

[Lucretius]

Holy cow...you honor me truely...I ask only one thing:

“Save that honor for the good man Sundwaev, tomorrow me and my Wife Ada are leaving tomorrow for a far off land of which we have no knowledge of.â€

[madc0w]

im in ninth grade. thanks, since i suck arse at writing.

[bicostp]

HOLEY CRAP! LUC! *hugs Luc*

You here to stay? or do you have to leave again?

[madc0w]

[quote="Lucretius"]Holy cow...you honor me truely...I ask only one thing:

“Save that honor for the good man Sundwaev, tomorrow me and my Wife Ada are leaving tomorrow for a far off land of which we have no knowledge of.â€