poetry

[samus]

i know there are a few of you out there who enjoy to write; whether for fun, anger management, or a way to deal with life.

so i'm creating this topic so we can all share our poems, stories, and song lyrics with each other.

here's a poem i wrote today. feel free to criticize and give tips:

so i sit here face-to-face
place-to-taste
rhyme-to-trace
casing my last mistake in the bowl.

and i call you up up
fix the
trust
dawn-to-dusk
tooth-in-crust
drink that pain away.

from the chariot's eyes
apollo tries
to steal the last knoll.

in my hollowed out cabin
sleeps-a-beast
crease-in-crease
greased-to-please
however guarded by saran.

but the blue stays true
to-me-to-you
crews-in-a-slew
apple-berry-stew
a mix design by an awful man.

so call me out
to trot about
and whip the mules in the garden

consummating the hedonistic daffodils

fornicating with black tar pungent smoke

grazing on stick-i-ful grassy meal

swallowing lumps in the throat
with the ever-so-conveniently placed number:
ten dash three two five

come on mother f***er

let's jive.

[project_failure]

i had something sitting around in a notebook somewhere. Wrote a year or to ago. Based on a book I was reading at the time.