XBOX 360 PORTABLE WEBSITE

audioplus1060 · Post by **audioplus1060** » Fri Jan 11, 2008 12:44 pm

Hey guys,
Check out this website were you can order a xbox 360 portable.
www.portablegamingsolutions.com
Check it out and let me know what you think. I havn't built to many websites so if you have ideas about how to make it look or run better please let me know. Also if you find any broken links please let me know that too.
Thanks in advance.

jeffslot · Post by **jeffslot** » Fri Jan 11, 2008 1:03 pm

Hi,

Well, I think you might want to lower case the "O" in solutions?

Jeff

Welcome. Thank you for visiting Portable Gaming SOlutions.

audioplus1060 · Post by **audioplus1060** » Fri Jan 11, 2008 1:17 pm

Thanks a lot I probably over looked a hundred of those kinds of things, what did you think of the site besides that?

Valium · Post by **Valium** » Fri Jan 11, 2008 1:42 pm

You might want to fix all the spelling mistakes, so that it looks more professional.

audioplus1060 · Post by **audioplus1060** » Fri Jan 11, 2008 1:56 pm

Thanks I will look into the spelling mistakes. What did you think of the site besides all the spelling mistakes?

Valium · Post by **Valium** » Fri Jan 11, 2008 2:01 pm

Its alright, the opening flash movie could be a little faster and without the repetition though.

Other than that its quite nice, easy on the eyes.

vb_master · Post by **vb_master** » Fri Jan 11, 2008 4:04 pm

In all honesty, the flash makes it look less professional.

Maybe you get better website template, and use a nice web shopping cart app if you really want this business to take off.

audioplus1060 · Post by **audioplus1060** » Fri Jan 11, 2008 4:11 pm

where would I get a nice shopping cart app? i can't find a good one on the web. Or at least one I can understand. Like I said im still very new at this building website thing. So any help would be appreciated.

vb_master · Post by **vb_master** » Fri Jan 11, 2008 4:14 pm

osCommerce

audioplus1060 · Post by **audioplus1060** » Fri Jan 11, 2008 5:15 pm

Thats great I really appreciate it. Thanks for finding it for me. I try to get something done with it. Be sure to check out the website later to see what you think. Thanks again.

Post by **CronoTriggerfan** » Fri Jan 11, 2008 7:27 pm

I'd disagree with VB, I like the flash, especially the way you have it set up. The site is littered with spelling and grammatical errors (most commonly the arbitrary swapping of its and it's), and it would be more visibly pleasing to have the sidebar and top bar links be professional-looking graphic links instead of just the white text on black. which can get boring. And though I know you have only completed a 360 portable, I still recommend littering the site with pictures of your work, especially in the section where that console resides. It's far more trusting and informative than just a block of text. Good luck!

CTFan

Bibin · Post by **Bibin** » Fri Jan 11, 2008 8:49 pm

Everyone knows that things with "solutions" in them are usually marketing BS.

Harshboy · Post by **Harshboy** » Fri Jan 11, 2008 9:26 pm

How old are you? Because the way you spell things on your site makes it seem like you're 12.

...and if so, nobody will buy from you. I mean, who are you? You're a n00b, nobody is going to hand over $500+ to a stranger n00b on BH...

When I say n00b I mean like a forum n00b, not in the way you build stuff. I saw your briefcase 360 Laptop, it's nice. However, I wouldn't pay you all that money for a 360 in a briefcase, I'd want a Ben Design.

Post by **Triton** » Fri Jan 11, 2008 10:07 pm

website looks pretty damn nice. fix all the errors in spelling grammar etc and maybe make your pictures a tad bigger and the embedded videos as well. and harshboy is living up to his name methinks! your 360 laptop is really impressive, didnt look at the price you had on it but im sure people would pay a pretty penny for it, its not like latptop 360s are growing on trees here!

Bibin · Post by **Bibin** » Fri Jan 11, 2008 10:28 pm

Harshboy wrote:How old are you? Because the way you spell things on your site makes it seem like you're 12.

...and if so, nobody will buy from you. I mean, who are you? You're a n00b, nobody is going to hand over $500+ to a stranger n00b on BH...

When I say n00b I mean like a forum n00b, not in the way you build stuff. I saw your briefcase 360 Laptop, it's nice. However, I wouldn't pay you all that money for a 360 in a briefcase, I'd want a Ben Design.

Hah, I thought you meant me for a sec before rereading that.