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Krepticor · Post by **Krepticor** » Thu Jan 18, 2007 3:05 pm

more emotion, you sounded like you were scared, also aim your pitches better, take lessons, at least in a wind instrument so you know what to look for

Also, how old are you?

nitro2k01 · Post by **nitro2k01** » Thu Jan 18, 2007 3:26 pm

Your voice has potential imho. But you need more power. It sounds like trying to sing quietely so your mom won't hear you. If you're gonna be able to use your voice fully, you need to dare. How old are you? Your voice will get better in time even if you don't think so now. But you have to practice for that to happen. Just keep on trying. If you haven't already, it might help to join a band, which might help you.

gamemasterAS · Post by **gamemasterAS** » Thu Jan 18, 2007 4:43 pm

You sound like your being forced to sing. You sound.......scared.

IMO

Post by **Skyone** » Thu Jan 18, 2007 4:46 pm

Take some lessons. Nitro is thinking what I am, it sounds like you recorded this at 2 in the morning in your living room next to your sleeping mom.

elementxmaster · Post by **elementxmaster** » Fri Jan 19, 2007 11:55 am

SavageLych · Post by **SavageLych** » Fri Jan 19, 2007 7:00 pm

I agree with what everyone else said, and also, try not to idolize another band while writing music, my friend did that once, and he kinda stole a pantera song.