Your font skills leave lots to be desired. Palminto linotype is the font you want to use. Also, clone stamp tool may be better than your solid brown garbage.
GRADING:
+1 effort
-100 execution
Heh, I remember that one, bic. Also, I did design a card game. It was originally called the totokanian battlecard game, but I changed it to "card wars". The main premise is simple, and it seems to work. I just need the artistic talent required to make good pictures for it.
the reason i use yu-gi-oh cards is a found my old collection that i'm not usin so i might s well put my gimp skills to work. i think i did pretty well.